"The sad fact is that it is harder to motivate one’s self to work when surrounded by so many distractions"
That is so true. I have that problem when I sit down to write submission stories.
Secondly ...
Well done! I love this update. I still love the way you write their interaction and conversations so naturally. It evokes the imagery as you read so that, although the screenshots are nice, it doesn't make it neccessary to have them. I like this style of storywriting you've used here.
Reading your story makes me want to play Strangetown again.
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"The sad fact is that it is harder to motivate one’s self to work when surrounded by so many distractions"
That is so true. I have that problem when I sit down to write submission stories.
Secondly ...
Well done! I love this update. I still love the way you write their interaction and conversations so naturally. It evokes the imagery as you read so that, although the screenshots are nice, it doesn't make it neccessary to have them. I like this style of storywriting you've used here.
Reading your story makes me want to play Strangetown again.