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pascal_curious ([personal profile] pascal_curious) wrote2009-11-09 04:23 pm
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Chapter 22 : Savior






Nervous Subject choked up a lungful of water. 

 

Well, at least I am not dead, he thought, at least I don’t think I am dead.

 

He became aware that he was on his back and soaking wet so he couldn’t possibly be dead, right? He opened his eyes and tried to focus on the figure hovering over him. A few blinks later the face came into focus.

 

“Jesus!” Nervous exclaimed, and promptly passed out.

 

“Oh Hell,” grumbled Bernard Carlton. 

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[identity profile] pascal-curious.livejournal.com 2009-11-10 10:37 am (UTC)(link)
I was just feeling silly when I did this one. I am really struggling getting this guy into the story. I have written about three chapters ahead for after I finally get him properly introduced, but I just can't seem to find an entertaining way to get going with his part.

I think you will find Bernard's history ... interesting.
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